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Not too shabby.

I would say just work on a couple things.

For one, try to keep the pace up. A couple of the scenes at the beginning when all the robots were marching, it kind of hung there showing them without anything happening.

Also, work on keeping their legs moving in motion with the floor. It looks like they're walking slower than the floor is moving below them.

Last, a few of the animations looked kind of jerky, seems like you used only a handful of frames and lots of Tweening. This is fast and efficient, but doesn't produce a good effect in terms of realistic movement.

These are all minor issues, I thought it was pretty good flash.

umm...

Ryandude... You move the hole around with the mouse. The character is very visible..

Good job, mainly because it gets the story across in a very small file size, and the mouse/hole thing is pretty neat too.

I'm a Christian. It's awesome. I drive a '67 Beetle. I also like the Wintertime and Being artistic. Play Many instruments pretty well and I'm proficient at FLASH. ..I ABSOLUTELY FREAKING LIKE EVERYTHING... ...Except Feminists and Homosexuals...

Jordan Witham @dragvw117

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